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ladyfawn
Contributed by
wyrd_faerie
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Thursday, 10th July 2003 @ 02:05:00 AM in AEST
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Lying on this golden beach under the moonlit sky
Everything seems so utterly perfect all my life
Ive searched for this, something so beautiful
So strong, so calm, so sad but beautiful.
Listening to the oceans moan, and I cant stop crying
Watching these stars I feel like my heart is flying
And I cant believe I nearly gave up all of this
I didnt know such beauty could exist.
I curl up in a ball and stare silently to the sea
I think how I almost lost myself to the black inside me
And I lay for hours, thinking of how you saved my soul
Tended my wounds and made me feel whole
Always guiding me through the hurt in my mind
Nessa, youre the mother to me I could never quite find
I stand up, with my tears still wet on my face
And I hold my arms up to the golden rain
And I scream, and I shout away all my pain
And Im beginning to feel beautiful again
And its because of you, my saving grace
Youre an angel, and that will never change
And to the heavens I shout your name
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Re: ladyfawn
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by shelby on
Thursday, 10th July 2003 @ 02:22:52 AM AEST
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This is beautiful Nessa will love this,yes she is and angel for sure.This brought tears to my eyes Im so happy for you!! Wonderful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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Re: ladyfawn
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by venkat on
Thursday, 10th July 2003 @ 02:27:42 AM AEST
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| Soo beautiful.. superbly done. venkat |
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Re: ladyfawn
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 10th July 2003 @ 09:02:49 AM AEST
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An angel for sure she is... And happy am I that you have found some happiness...Believe in yourself you have much talent and a good friend in Nessa
Shari |
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Re: ladyfawn
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by yellow_sundragon on
Thursday, 10th July 2003 @ 12:24:31 PM AEST
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This is a beautiful poem for a beautiful person. It's vivid, you know. Man! Hugs to you and Nessa,
*J* |
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Re: ladyfawn
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 10th July 2003 @ 12:28:28 PM AEST
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| im crying all over the place lol..i love you lucie xxxxxxxxx.... and a big hug ! |
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Re: ladyfawn
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by wild_heart_of_fire on
Thursday, 10th July 2003 @ 12:49:01 PM AEST
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a beautiful tribute to a beautiful person. you both have kind hearts and gentle spirits. much love in all you do.
Always,
~*riki lynn*~ |
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Re: ladyfawn
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 10th July 2003 @ 02:36:45 PM AEST
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Nessa will love this,She is a true ANGEL!
A great dedication! Christina |
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Re: ladyfawn
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by Crow on
Thursday, 10th July 2003 @ 10:53:05 PM AEST
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| what a wonderful tribute, the writing touched my heart. Crow |
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Re: ladyfawn
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 30th July 2003 @ 12:46:21 AM AEST
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Indeed a beautiful, captivating poem written by an equally beautiful person...
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Re: ladyfawn
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by Merry on
Friday, 5th September 2003 @ 02:40:50 PM AEST
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very well done - so nice to know that people can still count on each other and help each other in times of need - kudos to Nessa for being such a good friend to you - may happiness be returned to her tenfold-
enjoyed reading this poem very much
un beso
merry |
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