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wen u feel the water flow in through your mouth
Contributed by
dragonlover
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Friday, 11th July 2003 @ 06:05:00 PM in AEST
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when u step into the water for the first time u feel like your lifeguard committed a crime. u can feel the water rise to the top it is like a shook up can of soda pop. u can feel the water come in through your mouth and then u kno its all over for u but then u can tell someone is there by u. the one u will never and always love they drown there with u and dont kick and shove thats wen u feel the water come in thru your mouth
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Re: wen u feel the water flow in through your mouth
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by ArdRi79 on
Friday, 11th July 2003 @ 11:30:38 PM AEST
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| bittersweet, i like the struggling in water idea, its a little disturbing |
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Re: wen u feel the water flow in through your mouth
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by dragonlover on
Saturday, 12th July 2003 @ 04:25:38 PM AEST
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| thanks man it is how the killer jason was killed as a child |
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