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Tearing Thorns
Contributed by
crow
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Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 02:05:00 PM in AEST
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Haunted eyes and saddened heart,
release she prays from tearing thorns.
No gallant knight to move her soul,
solitary nights, periled dreams.
Her thoughts turn back,
the tears are born.
Words that break, shatter,
and fall away, veils of black
need cast aside.
To love again? her heart unsure.. Crow
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Re: Tearing Thorns
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 03:34:30 PM AEST
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very good write, but tell your friend if not the chance she takes, true love will not her way make
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Re: Tearing Thorns
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by Saira on
Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 04:00:20 PM AEST
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Very sad but beautifully written.
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Re: Tearing Thorns
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 05:17:46 PM AEST
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So sad, yet so beautifully written...
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Re: Tearing Thorns
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by Vampy on
Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 07:19:46 PM AEST
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| You've portrayed the sadness of your friend very well in this piece... I like it, very beautiful ;) |
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Re: Tearing Thorns
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by Dr_Calm on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 02:23:11 AM AEST
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Crow,
Very nice! It is so difficult to see wonderfully nice female friends suffer through trying to find someone special.
I wrote a song called "Love Is A Gamble" this is the fourth verse....
You can choose not to gamble,
Keep your emotions safe inside.
You can bet everything you got,
Or you can choose to hide.
But wining or loosing,
Is better than never knowing.
Go ahead and place a bet,
Love is the best game going
I think that is what your friend has to remember, it is better to take a shot, then at least you know where you stand, than to kick yourself for never finding out what might have been.
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Re: Tearing Thorns
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by Crow on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 04:46:59 AM AEST
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| she`s a sweetie, i hope she does find that guy. Crow |
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Re: Tearing Thorns
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by Crow on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 05:15:49 AM AEST
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| I think so, she needs to get out and take a chance. thats a nice verse! Crow |
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Re: Tearing Thorns
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by Crow on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 05:17:28 AM AEST
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| thank you for looking, and the kind words Crow |
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Re: Tearing Thorns
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by Crow on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 05:22:45 AM AEST
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| thank you, she will come around, just doesen`t want to get hurt again. Crow |
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Re: Tearing Thorns
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by LovingWhispers on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 05:23:57 AM AEST
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| Many times these words would have been my hearts voice...I have learnt to trust again yes..but its a very hard thing to do...To give trust when you have none.Still,it's all part of life and part of living it to the fullest.Pain ,happiness,tears of both laughter and sorrow....all paint the pages of our journeys book...Best of love to your friend...Very deep write.. :) |
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Re: Tearing Thorns
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by Crow on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 05:29:22 AM AEST
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| thank you, its a bit sad she needs to find someone. Crow |
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Re: Tearing Thorns
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by shelby on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 10:55:02 AM AEST
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beautiful
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Re: Tearing Thorns
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by Kay-P-M-Devenish on
Tuesday, 15th July 2003 @ 11:25:01 PM AEST
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I really loved this poem.
Best wishes from
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Re: Tearing Thorns
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by karoody on
Tuesday, 15th July 2003 @ 11:56:15 PM AEST
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very beautifully written...it can be so hard to put your heart on the line when you are huritng like this..best pf luck to you and your friend...i hope love is found once more for her...
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