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I Love You and Goodbye
Contributed by
Eloise
on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 05:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I know that youre not coming back
Though you never took the time to say goodbye
For I have felt the teardrops
Though you swore you'd never make me cry
Why did you tell these lies to me?
Did you think I could not handle to know what was true
Did you think that you would hurt me
And so instead made me hate you?
I can't believe that all along
It was bull***** that poured out of your lips
I can't believe that I once thought
I'd do anything to feel your kiss
And the way you told me you loved me
And thats what I believed
You told me I could trust in you
But thats not what you achieved
So it ends with hurt and hate
Instead of "I Love You, and Goodbye"
Surely theres a reason
For all the tears Ive cried
I try to force you out of my head
So I'll no longer feel this pain
You yell at me for cutting
Then give me need to do it again
I guess if you have made your choice
I cant take that away
I can only cry these tears
That i cry today
And I guess I reached the finish line
Without you in my sight
The place for you is waiting here
And you can be my light
The finish line came so suddenly
With no time to question why
So now I'm gonna end this right
I Love You and Goodbye.
Copyright ©
Eloise
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2003-07-14 05:35:00]
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Re: I Love You and Goodbye
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by LovingWhispers on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 06:06:04 AM AEST
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This is excellent!! The whole write appeals and I can relate but the last two lines say so much.
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Re: I Love You and Goodbye
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by MoonlitAngel on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 06:09:49 AM AEST
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Excellent. The whole thing is excellent! Great job!
~ Moonlit |
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Re: I Love You and Goodbye
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 07:36:25 AM AEST
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very very good
Shari |
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Re: I Love You and Goodbye
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 12:00:03 PM AEST
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| This is a very sad write that I can relate to so much. I understand where you are comeing from with this and I really liked the poem, it all flowed so well. I have just been thru this with someone I loved, so this poem really did make me cry. Thankyou so much for sharing. |
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Re: I Love You and Goodbye
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by SwEeT_aLeX on
Tuesday, 15th July 2003 @ 01:50:29 PM AEST
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This poem is really good..
I especially like the ending, i can somehow relate to this poem in countless ways...
Keep writing, and check out some of mine when u can. |
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Re: I Love You and Goodbye
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by stargazer on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 11:50:26 PM AEST
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Amazing. Absolutely amazing in every way. I loved this.
-Amy |
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Re: I Love You and Goodbye
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by tinka_belle on
Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 07:24:59 AM AEST
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i can so relate
good write
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