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A New Day Dawning
Contributed by
kangarose
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Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 01:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Here it is another new day dawning,
Soon as I wake up,
My thoughts are solely of you,
The love that's in my heart,
Always feels brand new.
There are so many doubts dear,
That I have floating in my mind,
Do you really love me,
And will you be mine?
Not much contact with you,
Reduces me to tears,
One day I may wake up,
Still not be by your side.
Lets not be apart too long,
Cause destiny is a valued place,
In this life we never know,
How long we've got till,
Suddenly we're gone.
Then what would you do,
If from me love had been lost,
Cause my time was up,
And it was my time to go.
Copyright ©
kangarose
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2003-07-14 13:35:00]
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Re: A New Day Dawning
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by vincy on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 01:42:38 PM AEST
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life is short and love is the best thing there is
so why waste it as far as 'the here and now' counts?.
The reasoning is perfect only the irony is that
"the heart has a reason that reason don't know". |
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Re: A New Day Dawning
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 02:31:59 PM AEST
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| awwww, keep believing hon... hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: A New Day Dawning
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by norm on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 05:29:57 PM AEST
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It's easy to get a brand new friend
of any sex and any trend,
It's much harder to keep that friend
Once they know which way you bend.
Try a bit of femme mystique
Don't be so fast to give a cheek
Give his head a mighty tweak
Let him stew from week to week.
I, myself, wouldn't stand for such treatment |
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Re: A New Day Dawning
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 08:29:58 PM AEST
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Wonderful ending. Just right.
Really enjoyed it too! It's really very truthful!
lovingcritters
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Re: A New Day Dawning
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 15th July 2003 @ 01:26:55 AM AEST
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well written..know that you are a gem no matter what and I know you will have love in you life
Shari |
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Re: A New Day Dawning
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 15th July 2003 @ 03:37:03 AM AEST
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| Well written..I agree with the comments of Ilhar... venkat |
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Re: A New Day Dawning
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by Crow on
Tuesday, 15th July 2003 @ 11:48:51 AM AEST
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| this is brite and hopeful, good work, Crow |
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