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Satisfy
Contributed by
2timesX
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Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 11:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The trade mark is polluting.
An original argument,
About their sugary lies.
A taste of red sweat;
Such a classic.
Its the feeling you get,
Not the prize thats won.
How satisfying...
To be a consumer.
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2003-07-14 23:05:00]
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Re: Satisfy
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 03:31:48 AM AEST
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| Hey, this is flatlandbob1, umm, I think that this isn't a metaphor for anything, but just an opinion of consumer products. I like the red sweat metaphor though, it puts together 2 things that mean hard work. |
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