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For me
Contributed by
deadly_blaZe
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Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 11:25:00 PM in AEST
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Stick your head in a blender
Bash your face in the ground
Suffer like i suffered for you
Then maybe forgiveness will be found
Slit your wrists nightly
Cry yourself to sleep
Tell me you cant live without me
And let me watch you weep
Pierce your eye with a needle
Tear out your heart one piece at a time
Bow down and let me control you
Then forever youll be mine
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2003-07-14 23:25:00]
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Re: For me
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by ericool_dude on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 11:43:06 PM AEST
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| Nicely written, however I would like to see the last line changed. Rather than "do this and I will forgive you", It would be nicer as "you can do this, but you will never be mine." |
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Re: For me
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 15th July 2003 @ 12:13:44 AM AEST
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great venting, liked this very much
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Re: For me
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 15th July 2003 @ 12:35:20 AM AEST
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emtionaly charged write.Well done
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Re: For me
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 15th July 2003 @ 08:39:47 AM AEST
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| Great poem ... good expression ... Jan |
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Re: For me
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by Cancer on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 05:47:27 PM AEST
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excellent... if only others could receive as much agony as they give. great write.
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