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Reminiscence
Contributed by
Nightingale
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Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 01:05:00 PM in AEST
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Love is the sweetest feeling that one experiences in life
It changes a persons life overnight
We are left in our own world
A world for us only, Just the 2 of us
With nobody else
In each others arms, we attain peace & serenity
Theres no place on earth where wed rather be
We wish to remain there forever and a day
Its just like a dream
But as all dreams have an end
We are brought back to reality
We have to face the harsh truth
We are now alone
We do not even know when our dream ended
Questions like Why and How are omnipresent in our mind
We, ourselves, are left to answer them
Seeing the loved one again is indeed painful
It brings back sweet memories which were sure to cherish
The time spent together
We hang on to hope
When the phone rings, we hope it is him
Unfortunately, it is never him
Hope decreases till the day we realize
Weve lost him forever
Tears and memories are all we have
Copyright ©
Nightingale
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2003-07-16 13:05:00]
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Re: Reminiscence
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 01:09:27 PM AEST
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bittersweet but so true
good write
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Re: Reminiscence
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by Stalkee on
Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 01:20:04 PM AEST
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| a good write with a lot of truth in it....i liked it |
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Re: Reminiscence
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by Nightingale on
Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 02:14:30 AM AEST
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| Thanks for taking time to comment my poem. |
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Re: Reminiscence
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by Nightingale on
Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 02:15:47 AM AEST
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| Thanks for taking time to comment my poem. i really appreciate it. |
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Re: Reminiscence
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 11:30:51 AM AEST
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Awww...sooo beautifully said... I love this... Looking forward to reading more of your work....
Jenni |
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Re: Reminiscence
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by PoloRM on
Friday, 18th July 2003 @ 02:30:54 AM AEST
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That's the exact definition of Love from the point of view of the "Ex". =)
Great write!!! |
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Re: Reminiscence
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by TheSpiritx on
Friday, 18th July 2003 @ 11:23:06 PM AEST
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| Good poem.. I gennerally don't write about love in my poems, but you explained the feelings of desire and loss well. Keep sendin the poems in :) |
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