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Dream (Green?)
Contributed by
Phildel
on
Friday, 9th August 2002 @ 11:11:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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She had this flashy car,
Only it was green,
(With three bullet holes)
They called her the dream
Her happy maidens hung
On the bonnet, he wrote a sonnet
For me, but gave it to her.
So I walked alongside the
Green Dream. Please!
Jelousy is not my name
Nor my present stance, but
In the face of lost romance
I would add the fourth bullet-hole
Just the same.
Her walk,
A whole different story
That walk, swear to God,
Bobbing along like
Staccato.
How did she get away with it?
Then, when she tried to impress,
Accent crescendoes,
The hair, the bag, the breasts
They all came alive to her
Rhythm (or lack of)
In the street.
Toe nails manicured,
Small pretty feet
Finger nails filed...
Then she saw herself
In the shop window,
And smiled.
But I realise, more than I hate her
Perhaps I dislike myself,
If I valued me, as well as she,
I'd have no need for wealth.
Copyright ©
Phildel
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2002-08-09 11:11:00]
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Re: Dream (Green?)
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by dantoad on
Friday, 25th October 2002 @ 05:36:19 AM AEST
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this is very deep...a good write..i like the part "i would add the fourth bullet hole.."
it really struck something in me...
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