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Forgive me
Contributed by
eternityandaday4u
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Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 10:05:00 AM in AEST
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Forgive me i am mean, forgive me if i am afraid!
forgive me if i hurt u fofgive me but i am frayed!
i don't know how to trust you. I don't know how to let you in my sheltered world by tearsand hollowness. I don't know how to accept you and i don't know how to accept myself!
Forgive me if I don't love myself as much as i should!
forgive me if i don't give you as much attention as i could!
I really don't know how to let my self grow and experience. I am used to my old things and all of a sudden my world is changing. I'm so tired of wondering and these constant fake fantasies of falling in love!
Forgive me if i am afraid of being alone.
Forgive me because i feel like my whole life i ahave been on my own!
I am afraid that i am going to be alone my whole life. i need to feel the love of someone new! but the only problem is that i don't know how to let some one love me!
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Re: Forgive me
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by Sexygirl on
Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 10:13:10 AM AEST
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| Your forgiven.....so relax and enjoy what is right in front of you .....You are too hard on yourself.....nice write...captured well.....take care.. |
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Re: Forgive me
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by Kimmie_mac on
Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 10:15:01 AM AEST
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| I understand about being afraid, but you have to let go if you are going to have a life. I like your poem and understand how you feel. Unique style. kimmie_mac |
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Re: Forgive me
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by norm on
Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 10:17:08 AM AEST
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Sexy is right..you're too hard on yourself
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Keep your door open
See who walks in.
An open door policy
Is certainly no sin...
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Re: Forgive me
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by wyrd_faerie on
Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 02:27:08 PM AEST
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| incredible...this is exactly, exactly what i am like...i don't know what to say...this is so me it's unreal... |
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Re: Forgive me
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by Saira on
Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 04:11:49 PM AEST
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This is amazing. Can see myself in many places in it. This wonderful write has just touched my heart. Well done!
Saira |
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Re: Forgive me
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 05:31:07 PM AEST
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Awesome write..you said it so well... emotionally gripping..but don't be so afraid to love..and to be loved..give it a shot...
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Forgive me
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by shelby on
Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 09:37:30 PM AEST
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very bold and truthful write.We are our own worst critic I must agree dont be to hard on yourself
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Re: Forgive me
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by stargazer on
Thursday, 24th July 2003 @ 12:07:48 AM AEST
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We are our own worst critics. We do not fear failing but we fear succeeding what we believed was impossible. I too, wrote a poem about how hard I was on myself. I am, or was afraid to be in love and I didn't know how to let anyone know that. I knew that I needed to feel the comfort of someone but I didn't know who to love or how to love them. I was afraid of getting hurt.
This poem was very honest to who you are and remember don't judge yourself too hard.
-Amy |
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