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Dance With You
Contributed by
Stalkee
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Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 10:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I know I'm still a child,
maybe a little young to say I feel love
But my heads spinning around
I'm thinking too much about you
And what I should do
I just want one chance,
one walk all alone with you,
And how I would love,
to have just one dance with you
Under the bright moonlight
If you are ever feeling sad,
I promise you that I'd give to you, a smile
If you ever need an ear
I'll always be there to listen
Wonder what I should do?
I just want one chance,
one night face to face with you
And how I would love,
to have just one dance with you
Under the star lit sky
Copyright ©
Stalkee
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2003-07-17 10:35:00]
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Re: Dance With You
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by Kimmie_mac on
Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 10:39:55 AM AEST
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| This is great. All it takes is that one chance and Just maybe they will fall in love. You never know. I don't know how old you are and people might disagree but to me you are never too young or old to fall in love. Love is just about what everyone in life looks for.Kimmie_mac |
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Re: Dance With You
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by PoloRM on
Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 10:41:15 AM AEST
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| Good "Lyrisme"!!! The stars, the sky and the moonlight are wonderful topic to talk about in love poems =) |
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Re: Dance With You
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by krystal on
Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 10:45:56 AM AEST
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| So true kimmie! We all strive to look for love: that one special person, our soul-mate. And another important thing about love is that you can't be afraid to take risks or you may miss out on that once in a lifetime chance. You may get your heart broken, but you may also find true meaningful love. If you never ask, you will never know... Take a risk and ask for that dance. And a lovely poem, so pure, sweet, and innocent :o) |
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Re: Dance With You
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by kangarose on
Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 11:07:22 AM AEST
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I'll go with Krystal on this one go and give it a go ask her for that one dance you never know it might be the dance that lasts a life time... lovely words and a lovely poem
chrissylee |
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Re: Dance With You
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by Saira on
Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 03:45:42 PM AEST
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It's a lovely write! Hope you get a chance :o)
Saira |
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Re: Dance With You
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by Chuckx on
Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 04:17:21 PM AEST
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Let me love
and break my heart
then let me love again
where if I live
and never love
my heart I’ll never know
we all fall in love no matter what age. we all get hurt, but sometimes it's worth it! go for it!
chuck.
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Re: Dance With You
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by Meat on
Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 05:03:48 PM AEST
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Wow, this is an awesome write. I love to write such material on love because it's just so mind blowing and at the same time so joyous. This is a sweet poem. I recently posted one on here called "You" so maybe you should check it out. It can kind of relate to yours.
Thanks. Pete |
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Re: Dance With You
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 05:09:44 PM AEST
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Absolutely beautiful...I loved how the lines flowed.. Gor for it, man!! you're never too young!! (Or too old)
Jenni |
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Re: Dance With You
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 07:04:46 PM AEST
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ohhh!! this is soo beautiful!! wow, soo romantic too, hehe, a great write!! hugs n' love nessa
p.s. did you ask her out yet? huh? huh? |
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Re: Dance With You
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by shelby on
Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 09:33:55 PM AEST
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ahh dancing under the moonlight how romantic
michelle |
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Re: Dance With You
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by Jilly on
Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 03:09:21 PM AEST
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Some people WAIT for the "perfect timing"... make the time.. make it happen..or you may spend your life simply waiting..and waiting... beautiful poem!
~Jilly |
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