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Lonliness
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Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 12:05:00 PM in AEST
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Ilhar:
The stroke of midnight came
She sat watching the flame
Alone again just the cat and she
Would there ever be company
Each night she lit the candle hoping
this was her way of coping
With the emptiness that spanned
Since they said goodbye in the sand
Of the beach so far away
On that terrible stormy day
He promised to return to her soon
But that was long ago so many moons
Shelby:
The clock ticked off the minutes
Minutes turned to days
The candle wax still dripping
Lonely nights and endless days
Haunting memories of that day
Came back to her still
For now she is living heart sick
A void nothing can fill
Prudent:
Lost in the grey despair of nothingness,
She falls into an abyss of desire.
Her forlornness evokes the flood of tears,
Of loosing him, she so much fears.
Lovewriter:
As dreamy thoughts
Fill her mind
The one true love
She hopes to find
One honest man
To take her away
The search go one
Still to this Day
He is out there
Open and true
As you search
He's searching for you
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Re: Lonliness
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by PoloRM on
Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 12:18:35 PM AEST
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| Great group write guys! and Ladies. =) |
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Re: Lonliness
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 12:21:39 PM AEST
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Terrific write, guys... loved this...
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Re: Lonliness
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by Ronald on
Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 12:27:12 PM AEST
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| Great Contribution pals! |
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Re: Lonliness
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by Saira on
Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 02:23:33 PM AEST
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Oops! I see my old nick "Prudent" here :o|
Thanks for your kind remarks guys! :o)
Saira |
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Re: Lonliness
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by Saira on
Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 02:26:57 PM AEST
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and yes my congratulations to Ilhar, Shelby and Lovewriter. Great work friends!
Saira |
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Re: Lonliness
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 03:24:27 PM AEST
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| great write!!! loved this:) hgs n' love nessa |
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Re: Lonliness
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 07:18:55 PM AEST
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Thank you, Shelby, Saira, Lovewriter it came out wonderful
Shari |
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Re: Lonliness
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by shelby on
Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 09:25:24 PM AEST
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Oh my gosh I forgot we did this!1LOL Whoops! It did turn out great from start to finish we work well together ey???
Michelle |
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Re: Lonliness
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by venkat on
Friday, 18th July 2003 @ 03:01:53 AM AEST
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A beautiful contribution of skilled writers..very lovely. I congratulate..Ilhar, Shelby, Prudent and Love writer.
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