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your perfect to me
Contributed by
wassim
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Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 08:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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your perfect to me
my baby my lovley
how we used to see
love allways let me be
at the mercy of a girl
letting our love on furle
from the cloud number 4
can you feel the beat
crowling at my 2 feet
it's full of fire and heat
no one can take us apart
not now not in the start
i love my girl and i'm caught
stay every moment in every day
i want you to keep it this way
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wassim
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2003-07-17 20:35:00]
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Re: your perfect to me
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by shelby on
Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 08:50:35 PM AEST
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lovely
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Re: your perfect to me
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by Daniel on
Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 09:11:57 PM AEST
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huminah... what have YOU been listening to lately... sounds like somebody's trying to get their freak on... oi pa... interesting... interesting... i think i like it... kudos! ;0)
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Re: your perfect to me
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by Saira on
Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 09:37:00 PM AEST
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Very nicely done. Keep up the good work!
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