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IF I COULD
Contributed by
Del
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Friday, 18th July 2003 @ 09:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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If I could be with you tonight,
I would hold you oh, so tight.
I'd never let you go.
If I could capture all your charms,
While I'm holding you in my arms.
I'd never let you go.
If I could kiss your lips so tender,
And you would willingly surrender,
I'd never let you go.
If I could only call you mine,
Make love to you all the time.
I'd never let you go.
If I would only wake up and see,
You could never belong to me
So, I'll just HAVE to let you go.
Copyright ©
Del
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2003-07-18 21:35:00]
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Re: IF I COULD
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by Kimmie_mac on
Friday, 18th July 2003 @ 09:58:41 PM AEST
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| This is great. I enjoyed reading it. Kimmie_mac |
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Re: IF I COULD
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by Saira on
Friday, 18th July 2003 @ 10:10:30 PM AEST
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Beautifully written as always. Waiting to read more!
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Re: IF I COULD
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 01:02:17 AM AEST
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Beautiful read, Del, but sad ending. Do you really have to let her go?
Lovingcritters
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