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the death of an angel
Contributed by
dreadfulsuicide1570
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Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 01:05:00 PM in AEST
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Tears will fall until theres none,
none left for her to hide
she hasnt been the same
since the day her friend had died
tears fall like rain
down her face
untill they reach her shirt
the pain is hidden and she pretends it doesnt hurt
he comes back as an angel
and took watch on her on rainy days
he'll never know
she loved him in other ways
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Re: the death of an angel
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by hardcoreputa on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 01:22:25 PM AEST
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| omg... the story of my life... this was a great write... it really got to me... its very well written... ~Apryl |
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Re: the death of an angel
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 06:43:31 PM AEST
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bitter sweet a wonderful write
Shari |
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Re: the death of an angel
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by Crow on
Tuesday, 22nd July 2003 @ 12:26:26 AM AEST
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| this is my favorite kind of work. a poem that tells it all in just a few lines. you could not put any more emotion in a thousand words. very good job. Crow |
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