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Pagan love make widows
Contributed by
cant-skate
on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 02:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Thy dawn rises from her tomb
Where silence is loud
Praying for the moon
Who is shining from the cloud.
Breaking waves announce my Bride
Its the only way the sea could sing.
At the moon mountain six wolves cry
And kneel for thy glory and Thee
The somber hill you re staying in
Is now defined
And your star had started to shine
The sun , the moon and the stars
Resigned giving you the only
Right to shine
Above your head lays a star
In your heart is buried the jewel
Of a serpent who wished to die
In your neck an open wound
To spawn life into our love
And to feed the creatures of our world
Queen of all my sleepless nights
For whose beauty I, faun
Have played my pipes with heart.
Queen in white silk,
Skin like milk
Horns of faun, lips of dawn
Come to me, step forward into my nakedness,
Caress me in your breasts of fire .
Breed my flame, have no fear or weakness,
I welcome you in my hole of desires.
Daylight has broken into a strange
Nostalgia
Night tired candles, seem like two lovers,
Melt in an embrace of conspiracy.
Between us there is this strange Chemistry
But would you die for me?
Beautiful dagger you may
Leave your case now
Wild red tears at the ladys hand
Kiss where her breasts with your sharpened
Face
Given is now what love has taken;
Death and love, they dance together
-HICHAM-
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Re: Pagan love make widows
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 02:57:59 PM AEST
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"Beautiful dagger you may
Leave your case now …
Wild red tears at the lady’s hand
Kiss where her breasts with your sharpened
Face …
Given is now what love has taken;
Death and love, they dance together … "
great ending... reminiscent of Macbeth in some ways... great job... hope to see more from you.
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Re: Pagan love make widows
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by wyrd_faerie on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 04:22:48 PM AEST
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| beautiful... |
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Re: Pagan love make widows
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 06:40:22 PM AEST
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intriquing and quite lovely write
Shari |
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Re: Pagan love make widows
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 11:01:25 PM AEST
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| vividly beautiful, love this:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Pagan love make widows
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by cant-skate on
Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 05:01:35 AM AEST
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10x :D Hugs and kisses back !
There is nothin in this life that is more beautiful than a kiss that took a second to reach the heart ~ c you |
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Re: Pagan love make widows
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by MoonlitAngel on
Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 07:32:48 AM AEST
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"The sun , the moon and the stars
Resigned giving you the only
Right to shine …"
I love it!! Excellent!! I'll be keeping my eye on you... ;)
~ Moonlit |
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Re: Pagan love make widows
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by cant-skate on
Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 11:57:41 AM AEST
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| 10x alot everyone ! hope u keep readin my new posts and hope i ll never disapoint anyone ! bye |
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