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Still I'll Call Your Name...
Contributed by
LovingWhispers
on
Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 05:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Can't you see the reasoning behind the sadness in my tears Haven't you heard the echoed sighs,of all my built up fears Long before I knew you,I loved you,yes it's true Yet way before our present lives,I have hit a wall or two Dead ends all around me,surrounded me to mock The many years I've wasted,my race against the clock To finally hold my other half,the one meant to be mine Whether right or wrong I'd be a fool,your love to decline And now I've come to know you,realise you are the one Life rears up with ugliness and seeks to bring my dream undone We cannot forsee the future,nor tell tales from the past And without the honesty of love's voice,we could never hope to last Ahhh but life's a struggle and indeed we're worth the fight But still my mind is burdened,with so much thought tonight It's just my spirit is dimly lit,as though a fading candle's flame Just enough light to dream by,as in sleep I'll call your name.... Scattered across timeless moments,are pieces of everything we feel Judged by many others who do not see our love as real If they could only know,that we too are somewhat taken By the depth of all we are together,and its not a mistake we're makin' If anyone were to ask me,I'd surely say online love is tragic And yet here we are across the miles,sharing in this magic Its just a tiny glitch I'm riding,all my feelings are the same Even if the candle dies,I'll still be calling out your name
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LovingWhispers
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2003-07-20 05:05:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Still I'll Call Your Name...
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ilhar on
Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 12:11:36 PM AEST (User
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all i can say is WOW!!!!
Shari |
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Re: Still I'll Call Your Name...
(User Rating: 1 ) by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 09:57:53 PM AEST (User
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Dont give up and dont give in,
Dont let doubt drown the fire within,
For surely as the sun will rise,
One day I'll look into your eyes,
And tenderly will wipe your tears,
That you now shed from all your fears,
I'll love away each longing sigh,
Our candle dear, will never die.
Roses at your feet
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Re: Still I'll Call Your Name...
(User Rating: 1 ) by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 22nd July 2003 @ 11:01:45 AM AEST (User
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Take heart and read his words above
For the two of you were made for love
((((Sharon)))) |
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Re: Still I'll Call Your Name...
(User Rating: 1 ) by Millicent on
Friday, 22nd June 2007 @ 05:32:41 AM AEST (User
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I like it. It almost made me cry. I was good |
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