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Indiffrence
Contributed by
yesterdaysfool
on
Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 04:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Walking,shoulders squared,chin high
I entered your room
Oblivious to my tears
You asked how my day was
As I ranted
You nodded
As I questioned
You shrugged
The fire blazed behind my eyes
I could think only of screaming
If I did..
Finally let one out
Shake the windows
Rattle the walls
Would you turn-
-to see
If it was only my heart breaking,
Or had I seen your indifference for me?
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yesterdaysfool
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2003-07-20 16:35:00]
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Re: Indiffrence
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by Saira on
Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 05:05:42 PM AEST
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Warm welcome to YPDC yesterdayfool.
This is a great write...beautifully done. Keep up the good work! Waiting to read more from you.
Saira |
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Re: Indiffrence
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 05:13:25 PM AEST
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Welcome to ypdc..... this is a brilliantly written piece.. one I can relate to..
Hope to see lots more soon...
Jenni |
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Re: Indiffrence
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by norm on
Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 05:22:18 PM AEST
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I liked your poem alot...What's interesting,
nothing 'given' says if your male or female |
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Re: Indiffrence
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 06:22:17 PM AEST
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Welcome, wonderful write, strong read..looking forward to more
Shari |
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Re: Indiffrence
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by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 07:32:54 PM AEST
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| Loved this ... can relate very well ... very well written ... Jan |
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Re: Indiffrence
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by shelby on
Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 11:07:16 PM AEST
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welcome to YPDC!! I can relate to this write for sure. Did a great job here will be watching 4 u!!
Michelle |
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Re: Indiffrence
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by Crow on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 01:20:46 AM AEST
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| very good work, Crow |
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