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A Valentine For You
Contributed by
TeenageEmoGirl
on
Monday, 21st July 2003 @ 04:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Valentine's day, its months away
I already made you one I hope you like
I spent the night carefully stabbing away
Making deep enough incisions through my chest
To remove a human heart
When you see me lying dead on your front porch
I hope it rips you the ***** apart
Valentine's day, its months away
But I've made you some candy hearts all by myself
Cliche "I love you's" and "I hope it's me you choose"
That you shove in your mouth even before you read
Isn't it a tragedy? A girl who'll make herself bleed
Cause she won't ever have what she needs?
But your valentine is still a dull shade of grey
Needs a touch of blood
It feels so good to cut yourself open
More peaceful than any dove
And what is more romantic
Than a girl who'll bleed for her love?
Hey how about this? I'll cut myself twice
Once for you and once for me
There's no way to stop this tragedy
Because "I'm sorry" is too far gone
No words can make this right
The only way you can redeem yourself
Is to hold me in your arms while I bleed to death tonight.
Copyright ©
TeenageEmoGirl
... [
2003-07-21 04:05:00]
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Re: A Valentine For You
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 22nd July 2003 @ 02:01:21 AM AEST
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Wow....this is tragic....but nicely written....
Hope you are all right..
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Re: A Valentine For You
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 22nd July 2003 @ 02:06:40 AM AEST
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emotional write here but I hope your not serious.
michelle |
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Re: A Valentine For You
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by krystal on
Tuesday, 22nd July 2003 @ 05:16:23 AM AEST
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| Fantastically expressed poem...I feel your pain. Just remember that there is noone or nothing in this world more important than you. Although the pain hurts, it does eventually subside. Look deep within yourself and find the strength that you know is hidden there, the strength to move on and to pull yourself out of this dark place. Love will come again my friend...*hugs* krystal |
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