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Good morn
Contributed by
Aika
on
Tuesday, 22nd July 2003 @ 09:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I wish I were the first sun ray
Coming to you in the morning and say
Wake up and take this life gift
Smile, start your day and live
I wish I were the fresh wind
To blow away from you bad things
Iwish I were magic water
To wash away your pain and give you power
Well, here is me
And I wish you a lovely morning
All the best for the whole day
If you wish, tomorrow I come again.
Copyright ©
Aika
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2003-07-22 09:05:00]
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Re: Good morn
(User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 12:03:55 AM AEST
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Splendid is the only word I can find. Splendid in word and rhyme. I enjoy your poems so much, Aika. They are powerful when need be, and tender when they should be, also your words are just great! What a wonderful future you have ahead of you. Aika,
I send you all my best!
lovingcritters
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