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Gorgeous morning
Contributed by
Aika
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Tuesday, 22nd July 2003 @ 09:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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First eye, second eye
Now I wink at world
Sweet lips a lil open
And want to sing a song
The voice of the nightingale
The stars in my eyes
I want to invite you with me to dance
In the early morn and barefoot
Let us enter together in the sea of dew
Enjoy the shower of sunrays
And the light in your soul shines and
Feel the fresh scent of new day
Go for it, live and do not hesitate.
Tell me now, how do you feel
You smiled just a lil? I hope you did
Do not lose your smile and have a gorgeous day
Copyright ©
Aika
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2003-07-22 09:05:00]
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Re: Gorgeous morning
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by lovingcritters on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 12:00:56 AM AEST
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Oh, Aika, I just loved it. It was light and airy, and even alittle funny in places, which is really good for a gorgeous morning must have humor, and dancing and all the things you mentioned. I wish I could have been there with you. I'd have danced barefoot too!
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