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Pain Unspoken
Contributed by
MoonlitAngel
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Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 08:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I feel like I'm falling apart till I'm broken
I closed my eyes tight till I was awoken
You weren't there for me when I really needed you
So I got out my knife, and the damage I cannot undo
I'm scared that we're only breaking apart
I did what I could with a change of heart
Nothing I do does what it's supposed to
I tried as hard as I could but I could not break through
I'm so sorry I don't believe
But still I can't just watch you leave
I hit you and you hit me back
This life is fading till all I see is black
I'm so tired of this life
Of the worry and strife
And I just want to sleep
You're the only thing I want to keep
I'm breaking now
I fell somehow
Take it away
Help me to meet you halfway
Fallen
Within
Broken
My pain unspoken
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MoonlitAngel
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2003-07-23 08:05:00]
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Re: Pain Unspoken
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by krystal on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 09:05:14 AM AEST
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| Moonlit this is so lovely in such a hurtful way. I feel your pain my dear. Love is such a double edged sword, it can bring so much joy yet so much sorrow. Things will always work out for the best in the end, whether it is what we want at the time or not. I hope all of your dreams come true and you get out of this life and relationship all that you are hoping for. Spread your wings dear angel and fly... I wish you all the best in your troubled times, may the light soon shine through your pain. Krystal |
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Re: Pain Unspoken
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by Kimmie_mac on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 10:04:38 AM AEST
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| I loved the way you expressed pain in this poem. Wonderfully written. Kimmie_mac |
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Re: Pain Unspoken
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by wyrd_faerie on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 10:39:04 AM AEST
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| ooh...this is amazing...but so sad...if you ever need to talk i will listen...beautiful... |
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Re: Pain Unspoken
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 01:01:05 PM AEST
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I feel your pain in my heart. Iv was at a time right where you are now. Dont let your inner light cease to shine dear heart! You deserve to be treated like a queen and nothing less will do.If you need to chat pm me ok??
Michelle |
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Re: Pain Unspoken
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 11:15:46 PM AEST
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| awww!! big warm huggs sweetie, im sending you a bunch of sunshine and smiles, love nessa x |
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Re: Pain Unspoken
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by venkat on
Thursday, 24th July 2003 @ 07:19:57 AM AEST
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| moonlit...my dear child..this is very pain ful read ..be couragious with a hope that every thing will be allright very soon..venkat |
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Re: Pain Unspoken
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by Krazykaric on
Friday, 25th July 2003 @ 08:14:24 PM AEST
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| I think that was a very good poem! It really expresses how relationships can be so hard and how trapped a persons soul can feel. You are a great writer! |
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Re: Pain Unspoken
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by yellow_sundragon on
Friday, 25th July 2003 @ 08:31:56 PM AEST
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*huggles her D*
I know everything will turn out right for you, no matter what. I miss you, and love you. Dean loves you too, you know...
*J* |
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