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Inclining Obsession
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gohar
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Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 10:05:00 AM in AEST
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Inclining Obsession
By Ashraf Gohar Goreja
Someone must be furious with someone tonight.
A loving heart must have misapprehended.
The norms of true love and its immense virtues
If I find such heart, its' not hard to be mended.
For all stars are subdued tonight.
What happened to their auspicious light?
Which they emitted upon all loving souls,
And ambitious, dear hearts, used to plight.
No! My own love seems to be vitiated
By profane wisdom of jealous stars,
They seized to shine, for she was more prettier tonight.
And her one smile is much brighter than mars.
Why the stars are subdued tonight.
For she would illuminate the entire world,
With her own delightful and inclining obsession.
Terrestrial globe will shine when her smiles unfurl.
Copyright: July 18, 2003
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gohar
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2003-07-23 10:05:00]
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Re: Inclining Obsession
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 12:47:45 PM AEST
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beautiful
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Re: Inclining Obsession
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by gohar on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 01:11:23 PM AEST
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Thanks Michelle for your
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Re: Inclining Obsession
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by gohar on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 01:11:26 PM AEST
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Thanks Michelle for your
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Re: Inclining Obsession
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Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 01:46:59 PM AEST
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Beautifully done as always! Your superb imagination makes your each poem wonderful. And you sure do have a great way with words.
Best wishes!
Saira |
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Re: Inclining Obsession
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by gohar on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 02:29:19 PM AEST
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AsSalam Dear Saira,
I always enjoy your beautiful comments. You are a great poet yourself. I like your poems and wish I could write like you do.
Did you ever read my short stories? If you visit
www.Chowk.com You can read my stories.
And also you could submit your poems too. It
is a nice site of Pakistan.
All the best. If you like, I can suggest to you many sites where you can publish your works.
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Re: Inclining Obsession
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 03:33:36 PM AEST
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a tapestry of well woven words making a beautiful picture
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Re: Inclining Obsession
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by gohar on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 04:40:36 PM AEST
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Thank you dear Shari. Your comments are
always beautiful and thought provoking.
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Re: Inclining Obsession
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by Saira on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 05:00:11 PM AEST
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