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Don`t Look Away
Contributed by
crow
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Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 11:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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I know the punishment you endure harsh words, betrayal of love, fleeting hope each day.
No chance of ever belonging
feeds the only escape.
I offer you this, no price to pay.
My heart and strength are your my friend,
you belong to me, and other friends you will make.
Have courage,
I`ll stand right beside you.
They are so much weaker, and frightened,
the cowards that beat you down.
Raise your eyes, don`t look away,
your strength is there! hidden inside... Crow
[if I could stand for you]
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2003-07-23 11:35:00]
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Re: Don`t Look Away
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by Kimmie_mac on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 11:42:44 AM AEST
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| This is great crow. We all need friends like you. Thanks, Kimmie_mac |
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Re: Don`t Look Away
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 12:38:23 PM AEST
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Beautiful and heartfelt.Yes we all do need a true friend like you.
michelle |
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Re: Don`t Look Away
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by Saira on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 02:03:29 PM AEST
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Such a superb write. True friends like you can make others life so easy to live. Thanks crow.
Saira |
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Re: Don`t Look Away
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 02:57:07 PM AEST
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well written from the heart, I pray she sees the friend she has in you
Shari |
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Re: Don`t Look Away
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by rusty1980 on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 11:53:14 PM AEST
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| good write!! |
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Re: Don`t Look Away
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by LovingWhispers on
Thursday, 24th July 2003 @ 12:59:38 AM AEST
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Now I know why the name "Crow" fits ...Symbolic of strength and courage...faithful and knowing.
I would be honoured to call you "friend" Another write straight from the heart ***smiles*** |
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