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I was set free today
Contributed by
bigabb
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Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 01:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I was just set free today
I am now going on my way
Even though I had many reasons to stay
It really just isnt for me to say
Many things in my life
Caused me much grief and strife
But for my son and wife
I know this cuts them like a knife
Now its easy to see
The constraints that once held me
Like the shores of the sea
Keeping the waters from being free
But as a dyke that has just burst
Quenching the waters innate thirst
To be freed onto new land first
And its pressures now dispersed
But something tells me not to go
For on the other side I do not know
But as a leave on the winds do blow
You cannot hold on to your soul
Our requests are now denied
When its time theres nowhere to hide
I have now passed to the other side
Yes you guessed itI have died
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bigabb
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2003-07-23 13:05:00]
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Re: I was set free today
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 02:50:12 PM AEST
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well written, amazing what goes through our minds before a major surgery..I hope you are doing fine now
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