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Falling for you
Contributed by
stonedraider23
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Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 04:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I haven't held you close
I haven't kissed your sweet lips
I haven't smelled your unique scent
I haven't ran my fingers thru your beautiful hair
I know your taken
I know my chances are slim
I know your love is for someone else
I know I dont want to give up
Just hearing your voice
makes my heart beat faster
Wanting to feel your touch
makes my heart skip a beat
Knowing I'm falling for you
makes my heart stop
But I know it'll never be me
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stonedraider23
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2003-07-23 16:05:00]
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Re: Falling for you
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 09:57:39 PM AEST
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well written
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Re: Falling for you
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by Chuckx on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 10:59:56 PM AEST
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God I can feel you falling, falling...join me at the bottom where we can both count the scars of a broken heart. I know.
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Re: Falling for you
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 11:17:32 PM AEST
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| awwwwww.......... |
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Re: Falling for you
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by stargazer on
Thursday, 24th July 2003 @ 12:11:36 AM AEST
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Like someone else said... awww... it made me cry. I can feel your distress and pain and you are not alone.
-Amy |
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Re: Falling for you
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by Sweetie on
Friday, 22nd August 2003 @ 05:07:56 AM AEST
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oh my gosh this makes me cry cuz it's exactly how I feel!! It really breaks ur heart to fall 4 someone u can't have.....I hate it!! love the poem though
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Re: Falling for you
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by savedbydeath on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 08:16:18 PM AEST
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aww,its very beautiful,i know how u feel,i can honestly say that i've felt like that once or twice before,keep up the great writes,later lover
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Re: Falling for you
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by Deathly_Rose on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 05:59:49 PM AEST
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wow....
very well writtena nd well explained poem...
The worst feeling is ot be in love and knowing that they don't love you back...
It's so hard to tell somebody that you care, without knowing how they feel... and if they're taken it's even worse... you never know how long it'll last....
*~Alicia~*
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