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My Sacred First...
Contributed by
LovingWhispers
on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 05:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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My missing is cool to the senses,yet my thoughts remain warmed by you
Adrift on the rays of your sunshine,I can always find smiles anew
Left to the comfort of your soothing,my soul is safe and held near
You're the essence of all that is beautiful,the reason my heart defies fear
Entrusting my life to your guidance,knowing harm will never befall
And of my heart and her dreamscape,you will protect and nuture her call
My eyes touch on the horizon,pinks and mauves carpet the afternoon sky
A softness envelopes my missing,as I feel you on the hush of my sigh
With each morn' light I'm awoken,to the presence of love's tender smile
Within me you roam as though of my being,so I pause to watch you a while
Behind soft sleepy eyes I envision your skin,warm and as one with mine
I know not the missing in this fulfilled moment,a dawning orgasm divine
Nightfall beholds such wonder,as underneath a trillion star sky
I gaze from the edge of a miracle and watch as our dreams circle by
One by one they are shown to me,each with a similar scene
Yet all are the same exactly,in that they were created of you and me
I love you,trust you,want you and need you,nothing more clearer could be
Relax in the waters of my honesty,and feel my love that flows so free
You are all that I crave and drink of,none other could quench my thirst
Never before have I known love,and none is more sacred than your first
Copyright ©
LovingWhispers
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2003-07-23 17:05:00]
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Re: My Sacred First...
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 07:12:55 PM AEST
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all I can say about this beautiful write is.... I feel the same way oxoxoxoxoxox Thank you for your believe in me , and for your love. I love you too.
Countless roses at your feet |
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Re: My Sacred First...
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 09:32:24 PM AEST
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| sharon this is beautiful, and stunning, wow, wow! big hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: My Sacred First...
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 09:55:40 PM AEST
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You have written a breathtakinly beautiful piece..Sometimes we think we know love and then all of a sudden wham we find out what it really is..I am so happy for you
Shari |
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Re: My Sacred First...
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by PoloRM on
Thursday, 24th July 2003 @ 12:44:44 AM AEST
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You took my rimes away... Now I don't have any for the comment =P
Beautiful write!! The long verses makes it even more capturing. =) |
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Re: My Sacred First...
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 24th July 2003 @ 04:08:23 AM AEST
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| Serene, and simply beautiful ... Jan |
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Re: My Sacred First...
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th July 2003 @ 09:37:03 AM AEST
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| Wonderfully beautiful write. You both are very lucky............Mike |
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Re: My Sacred First...
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by LovingWhispers on
Thursday, 24th July 2003 @ 10:23:18 AM AEST
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| Thank you Sweetheart.You know I appreciate every beautiful rose but errr...can I maybe have a vase or two one of these days lol.xxx |
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Re: My Sacred First...
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by shelby on
Thursday, 24th July 2003 @ 11:42:33 AM AEST
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took my breath away this is lovely.Im so happy for you.
michelle |
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