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lengthy lives lived
Contributed by
full_blur
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Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 11:45:00 PM in AEST
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lengthy lives lived in a garden for three;
tumultuous training terminated by darkness.
gabbling growth garnished wrinkles in gray;
solid sleep substituted for time.
bountiful breeze blurried the perfect mirror;
lengthy lives lossed in aquamarine.
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Re: lengthy lives lived
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by Saira on
Thursday, 24th July 2003 @ 08:20:28 AM AEST
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"bountiful breeze blurried the perfect mirror;" wow this is a very good line. Beautiful write. Thanks!
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