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ANGRY AND WHY:
Contributed by
RICHARD_CAMPBELL
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Friday, 25th July 2003 @ 06:35:00 PM in AEST
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You are angry and i know why,
you just don't want others to sea you cry.
so you hold it in for a while.
until it reaches its maximun high.
hurting other to have some fun,u don't relize its your love ones.
they are running away from you,
controle your angry you foolish dude.
life can surely be a bowl of plums,
rip and sweet in the day light sun.
Copyright ©
RICHARD_CAMPBELL
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2003-07-25 18:35:00]
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Re: ANGRY AND WHY:
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by Drew on
Friday, 25th July 2003 @ 07:13:52 PM AEST
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Some of your spellign errors look like you meant them to be spelled in street-speak while others were not intentional anger and ripe for instance
A wise poem Thank you |
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Re: ANGRY AND WHY:
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by shelby on
Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 12:45:22 PM AEST
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great
michelle
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Re: ANGRY AND WHY:
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by Saira on
Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 03:05:37 PM AEST
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The world is what your mind makes of it and from the thousand facets of life we are free to choose between sorrow and hope.
Hope she realizes and appreciates the love of her dear ones. They are too precious to loose!
I really like this write and how beautifully you ended it with a nice message.
Very nicely done!
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