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Red Tears, Black Blood
Contributed by
desi
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Friday, 25th July 2003 @ 09:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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That girl sitting there all alone,
hiding in the darkness of her own mind.
She cries. Cries inside herself at nightfall,
when she's alone, always alone.
When she cries, the tears are red,
from the hate and anger towards the world.
When she bleeds, the blood is thick, black.
The color of fear, shadows and rejection.
Rejected from the world,
scared of the shadows.
Its all so painful, she makes herself bleed.
Thick black blood and blood red tears.
It doesn't hurt,
Nothing hurts her anymore.
Copyright ©
desi
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2003-07-25 21:45:00]
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Re: Red Tears, Black Blood
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by Drew on
Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 06:40:25 AM AEST
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I see two illusions here at work
the first: the girl on the outside is not showing her pain.
the second: the girl has experienced so much pain she is numb
the question how can they both exist at the same time?
Don't get me wrong I liked this straightforward poem good work Drew |
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Re: Red Tears, Black Blood
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by shelby on
Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 12:29:44 PM AEST
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intense write here, provokes ones mind and reveals someones inner most secrets well done .
michelle |
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