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Ebony Fields
Contributed by
PixiePuff
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Friday, 25th July 2003 @ 11:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I lay in the dark Hidden, concealed I'm strewn as a rag In ebony fields A ghost set aside Gathering dust Balck tears wet my eyes This torture's unjust Caught in a corner Balckened and blue These ebony fields Are stained with ink dew There's soot in my mouth Seared with hot coals Ash falls in my eyes Charred earth burns my soles I lay in the dark Hidden, concealed I'm scattered like dust In ebony fields.
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Re: Ebony Fields
(User Rating: 1 ) by yellow_sundragon on
Friday, 25th July 2003 @ 11:48:06 PM AEST (User
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this rocks. As I have insomnia, I can relate..... and I think that this is a tired mind's masterpeice..... well done!
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Re: Ebony Fields
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 13th August 2003 @ 11:54:45 PM AEST (User
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Welcome to YPDC, Meg..this is awesome....
Good imagery..
Jenni |
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