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silent whispers
Contributed by
freda_burrel
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Sunday, 27th July 2003 @ 02:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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standing by the ocean side,
dreaming of what could be.
with the arms of a man ,
holding on to me.
his whispers of passion,
sours my soul
of all the things
and the thoughts of you and me.
with both arms opened ,
towards the sunset sky.
with dreams of passion
floating by.
i open my eyes
in wonder to see.
the wind blowing in my face,
just whispering to me
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2003-07-27 02:05:00]
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Re: silent whispers
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 27th July 2003 @ 03:48:41 AM AEST
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very well written
Shari |
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Re: silent whispers
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by S_K_Williamson on
Monday, 28th July 2003 @ 09:21:48 PM AEST
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Freda, I love this one. Very well done my friend,
Sharon;) |
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Re: silent whispers
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by Freda_Burrel on
Monday, 18th August 2003 @ 07:04:14 PM AEST
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hey sharon, ty my friend !!!!! im baaack !!.
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