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My Hot And Sensual Lover...
Contributed by
LovingWhispers
on
Sunday, 27th July 2003 @ 05:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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How I love the summer heat,as it warms my undressed skin
Lying upon a sarong of white,I feel the sensual dance within
Caressed by coconut oil,my tanning time has now begun
I lie and smile, oil trickles,melted 'neath the summer sun
Sensations overwhelming,expressions painted clear
My body's now in heaven,so smitten, summer's here
Upon my naked daydreams,her warming smile has nested
The sun orgasms,rays fall down,my every breath arrested
Yet only for a whisper,do I not breathe beneath her cover
She holds my soul like nothing else,Oh to be her only lover...
Adrift upon her waves of heat,I bask away the afternoon
Lying content on my side,as against my back she spoons
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LovingWhispers
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2003-07-27 05:35:00]
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Re: My Hot And Sensual Lover...
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 27th July 2003 @ 08:30:12 AM AEST
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wonderful
Shari |
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Re: My Hot And Sensual Lover...
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by norm on
Sunday, 27th July 2003 @ 10:46:09 AM AEST
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Your poem tells how people
wallow because of Apollo
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I'd love to make a lover of the sun,
But with apollo, where's the fun?
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Re: My Hot And Sensual Lover...
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by MoonlitAngel on
Sunday, 27th July 2003 @ 11:08:23 AM AEST
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Ooh... I love it!! Very unique and descriptive. Excellent!
~ Moonlit |
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Re: My Hot And Sensual Lover...
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by LovingWhispers on
Sunday, 27th July 2003 @ 11:21:23 AM AEST
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I call the sun "her" because its just what comes to my mind when I think of "her" lol.My puter is called Bessie...and I refer to mountains, and seasons as being the same.*shrugs*In art class,I was asked to create and exhibit a sculpture of the sun and moon..seperate yet together.The end result was a man and woman...fused together but only by mouth.Drinking of each other so to speak(day/night)Yet in my writing I most often refer to nature as "her" or "she" Mainly its got to do with nurturing..like a mother.Anyways Ive probably confused the heck outta you but dont worry..I do it to myself all the time lol
Cheers :) |
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Re: My Hot And Sensual Lover...
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by shelby on
Sunday, 27th July 2003 @ 06:38:21 PM AEST
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I love it!! You can come here Ill share the heat and sun with you.Been hitting 120 all week again Im roasted lol
michelle |
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Re: My Hot And Sensual Lover...
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by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 27th July 2003 @ 09:55:28 PM AEST
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| Mmmm... hot and sensual ... I love that feeling too ... (although I love winter in Oz and don't enjoy the heat here, I do love to bask in the sun on the beach) ... you express the feeling so beautifully ... Jan |
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Re: My Hot And Sensual Lover...
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 28th July 2003 @ 02:38:12 AM AEST
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Lovely write, Whispers...one I can identify with..since we have so much sunshine here on the islands....
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: My Hot And Sensual Lover...
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by Jackhammer on
Monday, 28th July 2003 @ 10:01:42 PM AEST
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| oh i love this poem so much! I am the biggest fan of summer, and even though its freezing cold right now..i have to go to the beach because i cant be away from it for too long.I really loved this. |
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Re: My Hot And Sensual Lover...
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 29th July 2003 @ 05:53:20 AM AEST
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| Bravo.Apollo orgasms here. venkat |
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Re: My Hot And Sensual Lover...
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 29th July 2003 @ 02:01:35 PM AEST
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| dearest sharon, im sending you allll my sunshine ---> (#) <----- hehe ..question; aren't there tanning beds down under? i know its not the same but still wonderfully peaceful for a lill bit, this poem is beautiful btw, hey i will trade seasons n' countries with you any time lolol, love you and a big *warm* hugg:) nessa x |
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Re: My Hot And Sensual Lover...
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by Merry on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 05:46:40 PM AEST
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what a wonderful poem - I too adore sunmmer and sunshine and lying around half naked at the beach or in the backyard - hmmmmm alas our summer is over - even the tourists have all gone home LOL. Now I'll be bundled up in front of the firepalce for the next eight months or more! But I can think about this poem and feel all that nice summer heat ------great write
merry |
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