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Buried Deep
Contributed by
PixiePuff
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Sunday, 27th July 2003 @ 03:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Deep down
Inside
It grows in me
It hurts
Sometimes
But no one sees
I've learned
To smile
To block the pain
And yet
Its there
A hidden stain
It's clutch
Will come
To wrench my heart
To choke
To squeeze
To tear apart
My eyes
Stay clear
My grin stays bright
Even
Though
It's clutch holds tight
I've learned
To smile
I've learned to hide
(but....)
I can't
Recall
The last time I cried...
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PixiePuff
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2003-07-27 15:05:00]
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Re: Buried Deep
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by vincy on
Monday, 28th July 2003 @ 03:18:37 PM AEST
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I love the tempo, like drumbeats in the background.
Almost like the victim smiling to the torturer kind'a feel,
the ability to combat pain with a bright grin is gallant
nevertheless there is denial here too, no tears allowed.
The last line though is abrupt, I was just starting to dance. Enjoyed the poem, I think it would make good performance piece. |
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Re: Buried Deep
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 12:10:59 AM AEST
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This says so much.....and describes your feelings so well...
Jenni |
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