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Do You Love me
Contributed by
JJTiger
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Sunday, 27th July 2003 @ 08:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I can't breathe when you're away
All my skies turn to gray
This tells me it's you I crave
For you, my heart I'll save
I wonder if you feel the same
If always on your mind is my name
If you do, I would like to know
I have all this heartfelt love to show
There's nothing in this world that make me feel this way
I'm not satisfied to be with you just one day
I know this love is true
I want to spend my life with you
You know I love you so
Will you let this true love grow
Do you share this unfeigned feeling
Is your heart openly willing
Everytime I see you I want you more
It is you that I sincerely adore
You're all I want to gaze upon
Never take my eyes off you for an eon
When you go to sleep do you think of me
Am I all you ever want to see
I have this feeling in my heart
I am wondering if you never want to part
I have confessed my undying love
That has come from above
I want us always to be together
Will you share this love forever
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JJTiger
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2003-07-27 20:25:00]
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Re: Do You Love me
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by solskjaer9 on
Sunday, 27th July 2003 @ 09:30:28 PM AEST
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very nice
u should be proud of yourself with
capturing the feeling of longing
hoping they feel the same
finally getting the courage to come forward
good work, keep it up |
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Re: Do You Love me
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by MoonlitAngel on
Monday, 28th July 2003 @ 04:58:03 AM AEST
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Beautiful! I know exactly how you feel!
~ Moonlit |
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Re: Do You Love me
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 5th August 2003 @ 09:09:45 PM AEST
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It's really sweet. Your poetry was beautfiully written and you should be proud of your work. I hope to continue reading more works of your's, Jon. They truly are amazing. Thank you for sharing the poem with me and continue to write.
Love -Jen |
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