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Undying Love
Contributed by
Vampy
on
Monday, 28th July 2003 @ 06:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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A soft kiss
in the hot, summer air,
I invision us embracing,
standing amidst a world
of stunning vegetation-
tulips and trees,
flowing water and singing birds,
daisys and grass,
tickling our bare feet.
We join hands
in the field of beauty,
I watch you laugh,
smiling like a child
as we dance-
spinning around quickly,
giggling as we nearly fall,
cluthing one another,
flaunting our obvious love.
We lay down
in the tall, green grass,
our eyes meet, enthralled,
we whisper sweet nothings
back and forth-
grinning with joy,
our hearts beating as one,
knowing the truth,
our love won't die.
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Vampy
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2003-07-28 06:35:00]
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Re: Undying Love
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by xxmonstahxx on
Monday, 28th July 2003 @ 06:45:14 AM AEST
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| beautiful.. made me think of my love.. and how much he means to me... |
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Re: Undying Love
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by xxmonstahxx on
Monday, 28th July 2003 @ 06:45:14 AM AEST
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| beautiful.. made me think of my love.. and how much he means to me... |
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Re: Undying Love
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by xxmonstahxx on
Monday, 28th July 2003 @ 06:45:15 AM AEST
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| beautiful.. made me think of my love.. and how much he means to me... |
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Re: Undying Love
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by Arwen on
Monday, 28th July 2003 @ 01:39:05 PM AEST
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Great piece vampy :) brought a beautiful image of trees, of mountains, sparkly blue skies, crystalline dewdrops, the colours of sunrise, love ...and the glorious little things that make our lives more pleasurable. Well done kid!
Happiness, always.
Arwen |
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Re: Undying Love
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by Wrybod on
Tuesday, 29th July 2003 @ 11:55:52 AM AEST
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