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Lost emotion
Contributed by
squeesh
on
Tuesday, 29th July 2003 @ 03:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I thought everything was over
I'm sorry I ever opened my mouth
I was so confused
And now the tears are flowing
I've messed up everyone's lives
And now I'm the one hurt
I'm so sorry
But you hurt me more
And make me cry
Why do I need this
It hurts deep inside
My heart hurts
It's torn in two
My eyes are red from all the tears
All these lost words and emotions
They're eating me whole
I can't take this any more
I thought everything was over with
Erased from time
All these stupid words
I just can't take this anymore
I'm sorry
Copyright ©
squeesh
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2003-07-29 15:35:00]
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Re: Lost emotion
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 31st July 2003 @ 06:22:13 PM AEST
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This sounds as if you somehow hacked into my brain and pulled my thoughts out. This sounds exactly like the thoughts and battles that go inside my head. I can relate to this so much it hurts. Great poem.
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