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(Lady Day)
Contributed by
StonedPoet777
on
Wednesday, 30th July 2003 @ 11:35:00 AM in AEST
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Slipping into the warm waters
Of your voice is too easy for me.
I try to swim in your melodies,
You just wade in the music
Waiting for me to catch up.
I skip through my notes
With finger dips & rolls,
On my tip toes I stroll
Trying not to upset the water.
You just laugh, look back at me
And shake your curly brown hair
Like you knew what was coming
Next. The ivory under my fingers
Goes perfectly with the ebony
Of your lips, your somber salutations
Embracing my bellows breath.
Its too easy for me, you see,
To feel you from the inside & breathe
The simple sounds that fly
From my keys. Lets breathe
Together & unlock the symphony
Under the surface of our music.
You keep swimming Lady &
Ill just follow behind you
Trying not to drown.
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StonedPoet777
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2003-07-30 11:35:00]
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Re: (Lady Day)
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by vincy on
Wednesday, 30th July 2003 @ 01:01:21 PM AEST
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To a very special jazz-blues singer
from a piano player.
I love Billy Holiday, I'm touched
she's both the water and the swimmer,
nice poem, cheers. |
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Re: (Lady Day)
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by TropicaDextrose on
Monday, 1st September 2003 @ 04:42:02 PM AEST
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| I thought that was beautiful. normally i wouldn't be so straight forward. |
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Re: (Lady Day)
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by LovingWhispers on
Thursday, 4th September 2003 @ 04:29:39 PM AEST
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| awwww....its lovely..the feelings are just dreamy :) |
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Re: (Lady Day)
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by Kimmie_mac on
Monday, 8th September 2003 @ 08:51:03 AM AEST
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| This is a beautiful poem. Loved it. Kimmie_mac |
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Re: (Lady Day)
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by Ruby1987 on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 02:04:05 PM AEST
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| so different it reminded me of what i know about Jazz 'n' Blues fom the 40's and 50's. Divine. |
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Re: (Lady Day)
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by Ruby1987 on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 02:10:19 PM AEST
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| I forgot i love the film "Lady Sings The Blues" Diana Ross portrays the life of Billie Holiday. I love Billie but i find it very hard to listen to her songsand her voice. Theres that silent pain i can feel and it haunts me. |
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