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Thinking
Contributed by
garyh
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Wednesday, 30th July 2003 @ 01:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Today I went to class
I did nothing but stare and wonder
About all my toil and tumber
I thought about what you did to me
I thought about how it came to be
I felt so lonely at the time
I felt like I didn't have a dime
Now I'm musing what to do
Knowing I will always think of you
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garyh
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2003-07-30 13:05:00]
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Re: Thinking
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by Jason_Robert_Britt on
Monday, 18th August 2003 @ 03:45:54 AM AEST
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| This is really good, you know how to wrtie... but it seems all your poetry is about the same. Maybe you can use that creativity to express something more topics and different emotions. Not saying these are bad... just, i know you are capable of so much more. |
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