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I Kiss Fate
Contributed by
jason_robert_britt
on
Wednesday, 30th July 2003 @ 04:05:00 PM in AEST
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Crawling, grasping at loose dirt
Blood soaked soil long forgotten
My ancestors slip through clenched fists
I kiss fate, she's a widow, after all
Rolling around in her arms
Like the pig's wild dance before slumber
She has seduced me to enter her here
Just to taste where my body will fall
Clawing, I scratch destiny's face
Digging deep with my nails a true home
Where pleasure and pain can not reach me
And the womb, and the grave are both one
Pulling the earth down around me
I wait in the dark with the worms
Tired, my lover will caress me
When sleep comes, I'll know that I've won
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Re: I Kiss Fate
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 30th July 2003 @ 04:10:04 PM AEST
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I think that this is great. You insert the mood of fear very well. Great job you should write more like this.
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Re: I Kiss Fate
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by squeesh on
Wednesday, 30th July 2003 @ 08:21:51 PM AEST
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That's a really great poem. It touches on different subjects ans spikes intrest in your readers. Keep up the good work.
~squeesh
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Re: I Kiss Fate
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by garyh on
Friday, 1st August 2003 @ 08:43:18 AM AEST
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| good poem... good job on using the metaphors like that... i love reading poems like this.. thank you |
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Re: I Kiss Fate
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by jaeann on
Saturday, 2nd August 2003 @ 03:27:06 AM AEST
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| when sleep comes.....i love that part.. |
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Re: I Kiss Fate
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by tinka_belle on
Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 03:58:21 AM AEST
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as always another wonderful
emotional poem jason robert
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