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De ja vu
Contributed by
vincy
on
Wednesday, 30th July 2003 @ 05:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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Last night in my sleep
I imagined this dream
waking up into this tale
that I dreamt of imagining
strolling through this obscurity
of a sleep where I dreamt of waking
up into this story in which I am sleeping
with you and slipping out of you simultaneously
then gradually my far fetched imagination fades
as I wake up to dream of sleeping with you again.
Copyright ©
vincy
... [
2003-07-30 17:05:00]
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Re: De ja vu
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 30th July 2003 @ 07:02:33 PM AEST
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very interesting
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Re: De ja vu
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by Jacquelynne on
Wednesday, 30th July 2003 @ 07:07:09 PM AEST
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| hey, good write. |
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Re: De ja vu
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 30th July 2003 @ 07:21:16 PM AEST
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I love it nicely put together
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Re: De ja vu
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 30th July 2003 @ 07:33:44 PM AEST
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| Intriguing ... cool write ... Jan |
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Re: De ja vu
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by Wrybod on
Thursday, 31st July 2003 @ 06:44:05 AM AEST
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| I dream'ed of thinking of commenting on your convoluted poem but when I woke to think about doing it I fell asleep while thinking so found myself having to dream about waking up so I could start thinking again and do something about it which I did and here it izzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz |
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Re: De ja vu
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by tinka_belle on
Friday, 8th August 2003 @ 10:23:34 PM AEST
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aww vincy this poem is soo sweet
well done XXX |
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