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We’re Up To You
Contributed by
Krazykaric
on
Thursday, 31st July 2003 @ 05:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Bad things happen,
For whatever reason.
No one knows why,
Its all the same.
The sorrow,
The pain,
The stupid games,
He lied and so did I.
There isnt one thing,
I can say,
That will make you,
Feel the same way.
Its all over,
Im lost,
Gone,
And alone.
No one is there,
To hold my hand,
My life is slowly,
Sinking into the sand.
Im aching with pain,
I can no longer breathe,
Im slowly dying-
I am suffering
I bet when you find out,
You will throw a party and,
Thank God that he took me.
And for that, you should seek help.
Its not fair,
You get to win,
While Im gone,
Lost with the wind.
But thats the way
Life goes,
I guess,
You lose eventually,
So no more whining,
No more tears,
I am standing up,
After all these years.
If you want me,
I will be here,
Waiting for a prince,
To rescue my fears.
I will no longer run for you,
No longer call,
Our future is in your hands,
I hope you wont let it fall.
So here is my last words,
I hope you choose me,
But until then,
Forever let it be.
Copyright ©
Krazykaric
... [
2003-07-31 05:35:00]
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Re: We’re Up To You
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by Asatru on
Thursday, 31st July 2003 @ 05:52:50 AM AEST
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| As I said in another comment, you should ditch the guy from the sound of it. It wrote this one well, it wasn't my most liked of your though. It's ending is nice. It's good your finally standing up. |
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Re: We’re Up To You
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 31st July 2003 @ 08:35:46 PM AEST
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| a beautiful honest write; but someday you may see, love does not always sting like a bee:) hugs n' love nessa |
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