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God’s wish
Contributed by
cant-skate
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Friday, 1st August 2003 @ 12:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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In my loneliness and in my pain
You supported me
You was the person that pushed me to my greatest achievements
And now youre leaving me!
Leaving me in this miserable stat of mine.
I wished that you was leaving; for a while
Or maybe with another man that youve found
Love with
But not death!
I cant keep one lonely God take you from me
I tried so hard and cried so many nights
And you still there, in the middle of nowhere
I cant see you or even talk to you
Your perfume is everywhere but I cant find you
Is that the way to punish me for being in love?
Or thats the way that God choose his angels?
I cant forget you!
I am in the middle of the street
Nude and under the rain
Searching for you
With no hope at all!
But Ill keep searching in every book
And every magazine to find your address
Although I know youre dead
They stole my heart from me
Leaving it with no life
And took the last bullet from my gun
When they took you!
After youre gone I m nothing
Nothing at all.
So baby wait for me, I will join you
In heaven, in my early 18
You was the reason of my life
And now youre gone!
The angels are calling and I hear your voice
So better for me to go now
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2003-08-01 00:35:00]
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Re: God’s wish
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by PoloRM on
Friday, 1st August 2003 @ 02:44:50 AM AEST
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Great write man. Some really beautiful images here. You should try working on the rhymes if anything.
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Angels go where Angels are needed
If to Heaven they get They have succeeded.
The reason of your life she was
before her leaving
Then let her be your will to go on
and a beautiful life achieving. |
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Re: God’s wish
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by Silent-Cry on
Friday, 1st August 2003 @ 11:49:55 AM AEST
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i really really like this poem ...
maybe as polorm said u could still work on the rhymes...it'd b perfect:)
i just hope it wasn't inspired from a real life experience...:)
joëlle |
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