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Dream Friend
Contributed by
crow
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Friday, 1st August 2003 @ 07:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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A friend who sees the needful child in here,
starved and weak, blood on both hands.
A friend to guard, no questions, the
dream I have.
But only to wake to a world
destined to night.
A night stilled and scarred,
where shadows move close to stand with you
just at the edge of it all.
Silenced they wait just out of light,
where life survives, or the shadows are born.
I`ll fall again as gray colors the world,
and dream of that friend who sees and stands guard.
Until I rise to feel the breath of life,
or death once more.
Copyright ©
crow
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2003-08-01 19:05:00]
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Re: Dream Friend
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by jaeann on
Friday, 1st August 2003 @ 10:41:14 PM AEST
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| very profound....well done |
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Re: Dream Friend
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by LovingWhispers on
Saturday, 2nd August 2003 @ 01:22:08 AM AEST
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| W ~ O ~ W!!! Where did this come from my friend??....So deep and dark.Every line is amazing...I loved it! |
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Re: Dream Friend
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 2nd August 2003 @ 02:59:40 AM AEST
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very well written moving, we all need someone to stand by us
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Re: Dream Friend
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by Saira on
Saturday, 2nd August 2003 @ 05:07:45 PM AEST
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Great write, indeed. Good job my friend!
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Re: Dream Friend
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by shelby on
Sunday, 3rd August 2003 @ 12:59:39 AM AEST
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well done it gives a deep thoughtful feeling.((MORE))
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