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My dear
Contributed by
Fenril(_a.k.a_ZTAP)
on
Saturday, 2nd August 2003 @ 11:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Beautiful....
...yet deadly
So fair...
...yet cold inside
Painted in pain...
...and sorrow in your eyes
I call thy name...
...a cursed fate
I mourn thy lost...
...forsaken dreams
I love thee...
...until my life's end
Forbidden wishes
lies in your lips
Warmth vanished
a frozen embrace
Broken soul
shattered heart
Faith gone
pain intensified
Lust satisfied
and empty stillness in my soul
Your mouth so kind
sweet scent of your hair
Crimson tears
crying my wrist
A candle burns
my life ablaze
A frozen thought
a darkened mirror
You are my sun
yet you burn my sight
Im lost
in your arms my hope is gone
I cried
my life wanes
My bloody tears
good bye
Im dead
but I still love you
Copyright ©
Fenril(_a.k.a_ZTAP)
... [
2003-08-02 11:05:00]
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Re: My dear
(User Rating: 1 )
by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Sunday, 3rd August 2003 @ 09:43:05 PM AEST
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Hi Fenril,
i love how you end this poem" i'm dead but i still love you.
but remember if you are dead you have no feeling or nothing.
nice write .i hope that person knows how you feel about them. |
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