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Good-Bye
Contributed by
suzy
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Sunday, 11th August 2002 @ 04:42:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Never thought you would just walk away
Didnt think I would ever hear goodbye
Im not going to beg you to stay
And you wont see a single tear fall from my eye.
This time Im going to be the strong one
My head will not fall and my back will remain straight
You wont have the satisfaction of thinking you won
And you cant fill my heart with that kind of hate.
I refuse to play the part of the fool this time
I refuse to let you use me over and over again
Dont pretend you even care about whats on my mind
Because no matter what you do you will never see the pain
Once youre gone its forever
Remember that its always been your choice
You think youre just so damn clever
I speak with my heart and you with your voice.
I think thats been our problem all along
I was too emotional and you not enough
I wont lie and say the feelings are gone
But youve forced me to be so rough.
So I guess sadly this is goodbye
Please dont come around anymore
Letting go is tough and I really want to cry
But I cant keep up the faade like I did before.
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suzy
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2002-08-11 16:42:50]
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Re: Good-Bye
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by George on
Sunday, 11th August 2002 @ 08:34:48 PM AEST
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| when one person in the relationship is working harder at it than the other, then its time to move on I think. It is hard to say goodbye but I think its time. Good luck. |
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Re: Good-Bye
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by Chrissie on
Wednesday, 14th August 2002 @ 02:45:56 AM AEST
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You convey your emotions very well in this Lasca.....a heartfelt, honest piece.
Chrissie x |
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Re: Good-Bye
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by Patricia_Petro on
Wednesday, 14th August 2002 @ 06:25:31 AM AEST
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Lovely poem, Lasca. Lots of raw emotion and full of sadness AND strength. You did a marvelous job conveying it.
~Patricia xx |
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