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god bless americas
Contributed by
Cancer
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Saturday, 2nd August 2003 @ 10:04:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
sarcasticpoetry
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war's foreplay dealt in tongues and teasing guns intoxicates the world with the wine of blood mechanical soldiers, line up to die fight for god and country trained to never question, "Why?" just shoot to kill, evade, and invade destroy those who would oppress but, question not the oppression you endure in your own backyard
kill other nationalities, that's ok by us but leave your guns in other countries for at home it's not allowed other nations ***** us off, so let's go wipe them out but, when your neighbor decides to nail your wife you better swallow back that bile
moral majority blood lust, lets loose the dogs of war the need of many to kill the few bypasses law and even "commandment" but, we still smile in our sunday suits even as innocent blood stains our hands
your god said, "thou shalt not kill" but i guess he meant, "thou shalt not kill, except in the name of country" bull***** it's all or none if it's ok to destroy another country just because they stand up to us why is it illegal for me to stab my sonofa***** neighbor whose dog barks all damn night
red, for the blood of nations that spills to appease our masses white, for the purity we pose blue, for the sky that we'll soon burn black with mushroom clouds and casualty pyres these are the colors that fly so high representing hypocrisy, representing lies a symbol for which we live and die a nationwide cross on which we hang the world
god bless america
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Re: god bless americas
(User Rating: 1 ) by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 2nd August 2003 @ 10:39:43 PM AEST (User
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Nice... and sadly so true. I loved all this and it is so angry just like me at the moment.
but, we still smile in our sunday suits
even as innocent blood stains our hands
That is so true Bush goes to church with the blood of thousands of innocent Iraqis and other innocent ppl on his hands. Great poem none could've said it better than you.
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Re: god bless americas
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jessica_Saini on
Sunday, 3rd August 2003 @ 12:01:39 AM AEST (User
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I agree with Bobo. Your poem is the sad truth. Need I say more?
~Jessica Saini |
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Re: god bless americas
(User Rating: 1 ) by hardcoreputa on
Sunday, 3rd August 2003 @ 02:26:24 AM AEST (User
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many ppl share your view me included, that line:
"mechanical soldiers, line up to die"
is so completely true, the huge conformist machines the government creates to kill.... all in all a great poem filled with insightful truth ~Apryl
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Re: god bless americas
(User Rating: 1 ) by jaeann on
Sunday, 3rd August 2003 @ 02:53:37 AM AEST (User
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i like how you put your views to work here..........it all rings true........we all have a right to be very angry about what our government is representing to others in our name
this was very well put together
i like the "sunday suits" line myself!!!! |
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