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Off Our Skin
Contributed by
sicknivesevered
on
Monday, 4th August 2003 @ 12:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
didactic
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PURE--------------------------------------------------
Blue and calm, find shelter in me - THE DEAD STILL WALK INSIDE OF OUR DREAMS - not the living PLACE - PURE AND UNHOLY
MESHED INSIDE - THIS SINGLE TRIBULATION OFF OUR SKIN
NOT BURIED WITHIN - THIS TRAGIC SIMULATION
Blurring of despair, evil thoughts in the air, the shine of your face tells me that you don't care - Knocked out of sight, I bleed in the night, holding, knowing that I am right - I am right - I am right - I'm always right
IN MY HEAD I KNOW I'M RIGHT
PURE------------------------------------------------
SOMETHING I CANNOT FIND - IT WILL TAKE A WHILE TO BLISS IN THE LIGHT - FOUND TO RELY - ON THIS FATAL INCARCERATION
Blurring of despair, evil thoughts in the air, the shine of your face tells me that you don't care - Knocked out of sight, I bleed in the night, holding, knowing that I am right - I am right - I am right - I'm always right
IN MY HEAD I KNOW I'M RIGHT
PURE----------------------------------------------
Blue and calm, find something in me - The dead still die inside of my dreams
Pacify, my time away - Sun deep, off my face
MOONLIGHT - LUNAR COVERED NIGHT
NOW SOMETHING - NOW SOMETHING NEEDED TO BE
NOW SOMETHING - NOW SOMETHING NEEDED IN ME
NOW SOMETHING - NOW SOMETHING NEEDED TO BE
NOW SOMETHING - NOW SOMETHING NEEDED IN ME
chronic nothing
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... [
2003-08-04 12:25:00]
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Re: Off Our Skin
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by jaeann on
Monday, 4th August 2003 @ 07:39:49 PM AEST
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that's pretty cool...it has a cadence to it...
wish i could hear the music |
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Re: Off Our Skin
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by Jacquelynne on
Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 11:16:24 PM AEST
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| hey baby, i liked these lyrics. i can hear your voice singing them. |
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Re: Off Our Skin
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by SuicidalSon on
Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 03:30:14 PM AEST
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| From a metal vocalist to another vocalist its to repetative and its way off beat try flowing with syllables it will help You need a critic so dont be mad You can check mine out if you want and feel free to criticise back because it all goes to mind |
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Re: Off Our Skin
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by SuicidalSon on
Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 03:30:59 PM AEST
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| From a metal vocalist to another vocalist its to repetative and its way off beat try flowing with syllables it will help You need a critic so dont be mad You can check mine out if you want and feel free to criticise back because it all goes to mind |
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