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Blame Game
Contributed by
juliette
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Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 02:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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You refer to it as a game-
The places I lay the blame,
When it is here in my heart
That I carry the shame-
Of a life filled with scorn,
Memories I have worn
Too long to let them fade-
Though they be tattered and torn.
Shadows you cannot see
Without looking deep into me,
With eyes visible to my rage
Why I can never just let it be.
I walk a tightrope of emotion
My one and only devotion
Swept violently from beneath me
Still I keep wishing and hoping-
For a road I can travel out of my own life
A dream that doesnt wake me up screaming at night-
Answers to the questions branded forever in my soul-
A prayer that someday these demons retire and let me go.
Copyright ©
juliette
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2003-08-06 02:05:00]
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Re: Blame Game
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by jaeann on
Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 03:44:30 AM AEST
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| the tears are streaming sweet juliette....a kindred soul weeps..... |
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Re: Blame Game
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 04:44:36 AM AEST
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Yes you have every right to blame those who hurt you.. there are some blind people around us who could never percieve the truth.
and they never understand the troubles of others....child.. my eyes are filled with tears..
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Re: Blame Game
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 03:47:19 PM AEST
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Oh Juliette, how can anyone fault you for blaming others... you have every reason to do so.... I'm so sorry to read all this... you wrote about such a sad situation so beautifully..
Hugs
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Re: Blame Game
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by vincy on
Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 12:59:11 PM AEST
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It's time you chased them demons away
rather than feed them and then expect them to retire.
Self pity can make anyone cry and if I were to seek
the justice I see due, I would resolve to vengeance
which opens up new chapters, more of the same.
Your worst enemy now is your memories, like mine.
'Sharp vinegar corrodes, destroys its' own container'
we are best forgeting even if forgiving may be harder. |
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