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Sad wings of destiny
Contributed by
LaMaGrA
on
Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 02:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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At first I thought I was lost
After being for years dust
But my feelings were to betray me
Shiny words you came to tell me
Months have passed and I was high
Jealous were the eagles when they saw me fly
Your come in my life made wings grow
Love in the air was to make the moon blow
Fool I was, my senses were out
You were to leave, I had no doubt
Time, I have been fooled by so many
These weren't but sad wings of destiny
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LaMaGrA
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2003-08-06 02:45:00]
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Re: Sad wings of destiny
(User Rating: 1 )
by juliette on
Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 02:52:12 AM AEST
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Great first write! I love the line "Jealous were the eagles when they saw me fly". I feel you......... And if this is your first write, befriend the pen because you really have such potential. Thanks for sharing!
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Re: Sad wings of destiny
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by jaeann on
Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 03:47:06 AM AEST
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| what a beautiful start...........such wonderful potential..........good job!!! |
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Re: Sad wings of destiny
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 06:52:03 AM AEST
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| good read.. venkat |
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